Sunday Scribble: A Little Diddy About Chocolate
Racing down the hallway of the Community Center, trying to set up for my home improvement workshop the next day, I ran into the kid. He was under 4 feet, cute and excited because the candy machine gave him not one but two packages of Peanut Butter Cups. The kid saw me and with sheer joy said, "Look I got two". Always on the side of the heart of children, I immediately responded "score!"
Mamma came out and said to the kid, "How did you get more than one candy? Last thing I need is for you to double your sugar high."
"But mamma", the little boy responded putting the candy behind his back as though he knew what was coming, "It came out that way."
"No, nuh huh!" Mamma said shaking her head while holding out her hand to the kid. It is the unspoken language that teaches us the most as kids. When Mamma puts out a hand, it’s the universal language for give it to me now ‘cause you ain’t getting it. Reluctantly, the little kid offered up one of his chocolate-y treasures appearing as though he was making a sacrifice to the Gods themselves, complete with the bottom lip out and a stomp of a foot.
Then Mamma turned to me, the bystander in the hall and said, "You want some chocolate?"
Score!
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14 Comments:
Aw gee did you give the kid back his chocolate? I would have...sad story :(
ha ha ha ha ha ha ha! What a great ending to that story! I hope you enjoyed every single bite!
Such a cute story-----from the enthusiasm of the child, to the predictable response of the mom, to the disappointment of the child, to your delight!
all I can say is "score"!
Score, indeed! This was great. Always wonder why parents worry that their kids will have "too much". Not just chocolate...thanks so much...
To be honest, I didn't take the chocolate, but I thought it was a good ending to the brief story.
What a cute story! A neat unique take on the theme!
I'd be that mean mom :)
Cute story. Talk about being in the right place at the right time!
Very nice piece!
Lately I've scored some new chocolate habits. I put a bit of nutella on panini and schlosh down a local Pinot - Our Oregon Pinot is world class.
Another habit I've tried- with relative success - when offered a chocolate treat - I quickly evaluate the nature of the "grade of chocolate." Sounds snobish- but counting calories is so much easier when you can add in a dark imported rather than a Hersheys...
Thanks
brad
poor child. i would have let him keep it for later. it was a prize and a pleasant surprise. i can picture his face now. from celebration to dissappointment.
loved the little diddy... i am always such a sap for the wee ones. never been here before... so hello to you and Happy Sunday!
oh i love this story. score indeed! i hope you savored it all...
That's a happy event on a par with finding a forgotten $5 bill in the pocket of an old pair of jeans.
Nothing like a peanut butter cup to take stress away, if only for a few minutes. I hope you ate all around the edges, then devoured the middle! What a fun story.
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